Tweak charmap; tweak zoom

2025-12-07 12:16:46 +00:00
parent b18ccf12bf
commit 1d53ff4277
9 changed files with 8 additions and 8 deletions
@@ -35,10 +35,10 @@ startPara =
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        <> makeParagraph
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-            ( "My last memory is the reconstitution scan. "
-            <> "Though experimental, this techology allows for perfect duplication. "
-            <> "At least in theory, "
-            <> "it hasn't been tested on humans. "
+            ( "My last memory is the pre-duplication scan. "
+            <> "Though experimental, this techology allows for the creation of perfect copies. "
+            <> "At least in theory; "
+            <> "it hasn't been tested on humans: "
            <> "I'd only be duplicated if my original body was...  non-functional."
            )
        <> ["", "","", "Hopefully I can take better care of this one."]